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I always find it amazing when someone writes a poem about something ordinary, and turns it into something enjoyable to read. You did just that William! :lol:

Angelwolf

Woo-hoo!! That’s one sensual vampire….! Are you counting the hours to midnight where she will visit you again? I am always afraid to post something like this here because you don’t know how people will react to it! Fantastic job, and I am so glad you posted this one.

You need a night vixen vampire picture for this poem. Here are…[Read more]

I like this one Oss, the description of a teardrop in all its wonder! I am one of those people that cry when they become happy! It can get embarassing :lol:

Angelwolf

You know sometimes you read a poem and the words just hit home and make the poem special. Well…this is that kind of poem, I like to call them “WOW” poems. This poem is sad but beautiful…..

Angelwolf

Unique title to your poem..”A Suite Tale”…it fits the poem perfectly. I enjoyed this one…

The last verse is my favorite:

“A rather unfortunate conclusion
They wish the deed was not done
Because the design became common
Thus everybody want’s one”

Angelwolf

Hi William,

BRAVO!!! This poem is fantastic, it’s cute, it’s funny and it’s creative!! I like the creative way you put the words at the end, and they were similar having a “tion” on the end of them.

Angelwolf

Dawny what a delight to have your signature on here, I love it, and thanks for the comment!!

Angelwolf

This is incredibly sad and tragic, I wonder what inspired this poem? Good poem Oss… and the words just left me with sorrow!!

Angelwolf

Hi Lou-Lou….

Thanks Angel!!

Yes it is a vampire poem..I am a big Anne Rice fan! Have read all her books…

Angelwolf

Temptress..so you write dark poetry, I love it!! I much rather read a dark piece than anything else. The icey tears encased by time is a great line!

See you on the dark side :lol:

Angelwolf

Thanks for the post, but this poem was a “creative word poem” in a poetry group I am on, and all those words you mentioned are on the list of words that had to be in the poem for the poem to be submitted. It also had to be on a certain subject. I guess some would think that it makes it difficult when you have 30 words you have to use, but I find…[Read more]

Angelwolf

Thanks Angel…I found this and thought you might like it, it is cute!! You can have it to use!!

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Very descriptive and different..this is my favorite part.

“Mountains coax a thin white moon
into their heavy breasts.

A clear sky exposes its secret stars,
she christens them with dead friends’ names.”

Angelwolf

Thanks guys, you all are very supportive of my poems. I have sold some of my love poems, and some childrens poems. I have been published in some publications, and e-zings.

Angelwolf

Thanks Angel….you are a sweetie!! :lol: :lol:

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That is my impression of trying to act coy and sexy. Oh my goodness thank you…..

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Thanks Spanish….yes that is me. I had to get the picture sized down. That picture was taken 2 days after I had my wisdom teeth removed. It is a wonder I don’t look like a chipmonk!! :lol: :lol:

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