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    now now missus Echo . . . .

    I’ve attempted endless jottings, and screwed each one up in frustration, thinking them self-indulgent and trite. They never made a waste paper basket big enough for me. So I live by the Golden Rule and try and treat others as I’d like to be dealt with myself.

    Which causes no end of trouble.
    :roll:

    You’re better than this. Dig deeper before deciding upon the ‘submit’ button. Are you being completely accurate to your sensibilities or would an extra five minutes have helped ? That’s all I’m saying. The space between your shoulders is where the wings should be. What use are honeyed words of ‘ fantastic echo, brilliant, your photo is now on my toilet-seat’ . . . . . . . ? ?

    Exactly. Only the harshest criticism can help you at this hour. So come on ! – it’s utter garbage – you can do it ! – we can slit wrists to a different mediocrity – everyone’s behind you ! – fgs delete your account – go girl go !

    I really couldn’t be more positive.

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    @nemesis wrote:

    Ha, want some competition?

    Just as an aside… it really is a self indulgent piece, and beleive me it`s my favourite poem at the moment lol

    I would say that all poetry is self indulgent, for who do we write initially, but ourselves? Honing a poem can take the poetry out of a piece of work written from the heart. A true craftsperson can occasionally find the balance between tweaking and twirling and keeping the message true.

    Now that is as good a piece of pretentious psychobabble as you are every likely to find on this ‘ere message board. :)

    Purlizter winning rubes purlease write more purrfection :)

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