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Take me to the edge, make me lose control,
Plumb the depths of desire to find our souls,
I`ll growl and bite, snarl and fight,
Prowl the dark and seek out the light,
And by a silver moon you can flaunt me,
As with a number you know how you haunt me,
You wove your magic, cast your spell,
Took me to heaven and flirted with hell,
I`ll be your challenge and avoid your snare,
Take me on as long as you dare,
Let`s play the game, see who wins,
Oh my,
Count me in.self-indulgent rubbish, and I’m being kind . . . . .
@toybulldog wrote:
self-indulgent rubbish, and I’m being kind . . . . .
self-indulgent maybe, rubbish extremely likely, you kind never :P
@nemesis wrote:
Take me to the edge, make me lose control,
Plumb the depths of desire to find our souls,
I`ll growl and bite, snarl and fight,
Prowl the dark and seek out the light,
And by a silver moon you can flaunt me,
As with a number you know how you haunt me,
You wove your magic, cast your spell,
Took me to heaven and flirted with hell,
I`ll be your challenge and avoid your snare,
Take me on as long as you dare,
Let`s play the game, see who wins,
Oh my,
Count me in.I love your work Nemesis dont get put off by negative people
Teapot
cosy,cosy bonnie and fair,
the diamonds sparkled in yer hair.
yer off to Pats, I wish ye well.
I cant go there..Lies that tell.cosy, laddie, what a laugh,
my wee man city bloke, In my gaff.
Up Central drive, doon too the pump.
cosy ye always have the HUMP..Yer barred here nooo, so I believe !
I will miss ye all the same.
fae wee pals noo, we do concieve..cosy..I have nae shame..
I miss ye xx
LOL Im no poet.. but i think im ok actually :) ya kuntz !
erm.. maybe i was not self indulgent enough to split on memorys and wish the damm cold never moved enough like my auld bowels..
fear no more the heat o the sun..
and lets the poets have freeedom :)
Mrs T, thank you, I`m glad you like :)
Toy…. I care not what you think, only that you cared enough to pass judgement :P
Rubes I loved your poem :lol:
In all seriousness Zero probably isn`t a masterpeice, it only took 5 minutes to write, but I like it, and the person that it matters to is happy so there!!!!
cheers nemesis.. Im putting it up for a pulitzer prize next year ;)
Ha, want some competition?
Just as an aside… it really is a self indulgent piece, and beleive me it`s my favourite poem at the moment lol
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