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    Two souls drift, and move together, apart
    As the pull of the moon on the tides bring the sea up on the beach
    it also brings you into reach
    Only to pull you away again
    With a power too great to comprehend
    And the sun draws the flower into its own warm light
    Causing petals to open and catch the rays
    As I’m drawn to you in some haunting way
    In thought and form I find your light
    And bask in warmth
    Fires glowing embers fade, and wane
    But do not die with patience, caring
    Enough to turn one luminous coal
    Into a raging blaze between lost souls
    Pushing back the velvet night
    Brilliant circle of fickle light
    As with love that flickers, fades
    To burst forth into flame again
    Recollections of you have kept a spark
    Burning in the deepest recesses of my heart
    And away you went, again so soon
    Just like the tides,
    The pull of the moon.

    Anon

    #197204

    Oss

    Lovely Angel darlin, I really like it x

    #197205

    Beautiful descriptions in his poem. I love this Angel!

    Angelwolf

    #197206

    Found the author…..by John Selfridge

    #197207

    I was slightly disapointed when I realised the poem was not yours , I like the way it uses the coming and going of different elements in conjuntion with the coming and going of love-Love William :)

    #197208

    I really enjoyed reading this one.

    For me it spoke of soul mates seperated in body but forever intertwined in spirit. It really got me thinking which is always a good thing.

    #197209

    @william_a_edge wrote:

    I was slightly disapointed when I realised the poem was not yours , I like the way it uses the coming and going of different elements in conjuntion with the coming and going of love-Love William :)

    I only wish I could write poetry like that William xx

    #197210

    @spanish wrote:

    I really enjoyed reading this one.

    For me it spoke of soul mates seperated in body but forever intertwined in spirit. It really got me thinking which is always a good thing.

    Spanish…..that is EXACTLY wot this poem is about….soulmates seperated in body but not in mind, soul and spirit, I found it for my soulmate and the words just spoke out to me, I’m glad you enjoyed reading it :D

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