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That was well-put, Sairs.
I always have time for your comments on poetry. They’re a genuine strong point of yours xx
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I think I got it, but maybe that’s because I am a Mother, open to interpretation I guess, as poetry is.
You got it.
A woman is much more in touch with her body than a man is with his. I have two children, and each time I was awe-struck at the changes to the woman’s body as the pregnancy developed. It’s not something I’ll ever experience, but I envy it – apart from the pain at the end, that is.
to the pain.The knowledge of learning and lore is my knowledge. It’s at a remove from the immediate knowledge of children, or cat knowledge, or deer knowledge, or the knowledge of growth a woman feels inside her with the baby. Mine is more abstracted.
I do remember that deeper knowledge when I was small, though.
Well, you appear to believe in God Scep – maybe you will be reborn as a woman and get to push a large object out of your private parts next time around.
lol
Bloody Hell!!!!
Poems.
If a poem is written for the writer by the writer, I call that a diary.
Sarah your poems show promise, to me they are a bit shit but each to their own. Somebody else would find them amazingly decent. I would give u a big star for being funny, honest and singing better than me.
Its all relative one persons pawn is another persons porn.
I got that from watching Debbie Does Cash Converters on the 9ball route
Much love to every1 , except haters who can style out with 2 fingers
I Wrote a poem, many many years ago, but i stupidly put it on msn, someone copied it and claimed it was theirs so im not sure i could ever put it here really
Bloody Hell!!!!
that was with a lol as well as with horror at the thought.
Isn’t it Hindus who believe in reincarnation, or am I getting mixed up?
Poems. If a poem is written for the writer by the writer, I call that a diary. Sarah your poems show promise, to me they are a bit shit but each to their own. Somebody else would find them amazingly decent. I would give u a big star for being funny, honest and singing better than me. Its all relative one persons pawn is another persons porn. I got that from watching Debbie Does Cash Converters on the 9ball route Much love to every1 , except haters who can style out with 2 fingers
Really John?
Considering you struggle most of the time to make any sentence sound remotely coherent, you are random and you are supposedly my ‘friend’ yet say my poems are a ‘bit shit’.
who do you think you are?
you write a poem then
Just a poem that jumped into my head not about anyone in particular (coughs)
The Disgruntled Woman/MAN
I am throwing all my toys out I am stroppy – and I’m mean
Ive gone from naught to crappy there was nothing in between
I never got my own way so im grumpy and I’m snappy
So now I’m going to bash you all just by using the lappy
Im self centred and im needy and want all your love on me
And if Im not placated, just see how arsey I can be
I am immature and childish and insist I get my way
If I don’t get what im after I will sulk then then go away
Im unreasonable and sarcastic im a cow when I am cross
You cant take me to your fairground I will EAT your candy floss
I want all of your attention and to suck you til youre dry
If you don’t give me what im after I will STOMP MY FEET then cry
Il be jumping up and down in rage not be a happy bunny
I will swear and curse and moan and winge it wont be very funny
I will dominate beligerate be like a stalker whose on acid
I’ll bore you underscore you and you’ll be forever FLACID
I want to own you and rehome you and to tie you to my bed
It wont take you long to realise – im screwed up in the head
Its better to avoid me Im a show off and I’m dence
And you probably haven’t noticed that I DON’T MAKE ANY SENSE
I am watching I am watching and I never ever go
I will send you pictures of myself (like my very wonky toe)
I’ll pretend im not in love with you because im in denial
Ill forget how much im into you whilst soaking others with my bile
Ill be unfriendly wherever possible and spoil every bodys fun
Will send you pictures of my cleavage and may even flash my bum
Im a scary witch and such a bitch – annoying you is my hobby
And you’ll lie awake you will not sleep planning where to hide my body
I write.
So I challenge you John
write something.
If it makes any sense at all it would be a bonus.
laptop flew to tescos looking for a tuna sandwich
DO NOT MAKE ME FLOBBALOB YOU
weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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Laine i’d love to see anything you’ve written x
I really liked that poem. It was funny, and it even kept its rhythm (not always achieved by people here, obsessed as they are with rhyme).
Waiting for Laine.
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