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19 February, 2006 at 11:57 am #2951
~Relentless Ribbons Of Love ~
Emerald gems, and velvet tapestries..
relentless ribbons of love. Turning and curling, disintegrating before reaching
the polished ivory marble ceiling.Crystal mirrors.. silken flowers,
reflecting their magnificent colors and beauty
in the radiant surface of the mirrors.
Quivering flesh..iridescent strands of beautiful curls, contrasting sharply with her white swanlike throat.Shapely body exposed when she walked.
Ribbons of silk, clinging to her naked body,
like a second skin. Emerald eyes framed by thick black lashes.High cheekbones; accentuating the delicate
surface of her face. White gold and prismatic
diamonds clinging to her left wrist and throat.
Diamond tears at her ears, catching the light from chandeliers, and casting it about in all directions.Dawn-tinted champagne and fanciful desire.
Dreamy roses and fleeting memories.
Daytime erotic fantasies and lustrous red velvet polish.
“Relentless Ribbons Of Love”. Arching and veering, disintegrating before reaching the distant ceiling.Angelwolf
19 February, 2006 at 9:11 pm #198080Wonderful AW……awakens the passion inside :D
19 February, 2006 at 9:37 pm #198081Thanks Angel…I found this and thought you might like it, it is cute!! You can have it to use!!
19 February, 2006 at 9:47 pm #198082I found it more erotic than passionate. It was if I was sitting on a chair watching her walk by and was kind of undressing her slowly with my eyes.
Even if I misinterpreted this one, I still loved it, great work again Pam :D :D
19 February, 2006 at 9:47 pm #198083@angelwolf00 wrote:
Thanks Angel…I found this and thought you might like it, it is cute!! You can have it to use!!
LOL AW……..I’m as pure as the driven snow me :wink: :lol: Very cute tho……..I’ll save it if ya don’t mind :D
Hope your well this evening xxxx
19 February, 2006 at 9:55 pm #198084Thank you Spanish! I think of it as erotic also. I always loved this poem…it is an old one but it was fun to write!!
Angelwolf
19 February, 2006 at 10:10 pm #198085Whewee!!
I read this out to myself in the style of an American movie announcer on dope, and boy was it erotic!
Thanks
CC
19 February, 2006 at 10:47 pm #198086@spanish wrote:
Even if I misinterpreted this one, I still loved it, great work again Pam :D :D
I am trying to resist asking what Pam’s Surname is but it’s bluddy difficult :)
20 February, 2006 at 12:43 am #198087I didn’t like it. It made no sense. ribbons dont defy gravity and it relied too
much on sexual inuendo which ultimately failed to raise it from mediocre.20 February, 2006 at 8:49 pm #198088 -
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