Poetry Threat (well ok thread!) mark 2

[wilma]

@sunshine1 wrote:

oi pml i wasnt taking the p’s out of ure poem ddnt even read it yet lol, that poem was about my cat I LOVE MY CAT i do i do i do…….. :lol: :lol: :lol:

just read you poem now and it is lovely, but made me feel sad…..

so i read my cat poem again to cheer me up…. and tut oss the one u learned at four had no fluffy mat in it….. mine has

took me ages to think of tht one tut lol well 3 mins but still………..

and excellent it was too sunshine :)

[jay]

past…..
time gone by….
not lost or abandoned
simply hidden deep inside
roused, woken…
by a smile, smell, sight

present….
here and now….
live for the moment
fast, and make it count
it could all be gone
with a rush of wind
blink of an eye….

future….
what u make it….
jobs, savings, houses
what for….
losing family, friends
without omen….warning
but ….
to carry on…
as they would wish
as they watch over
is our most significant ambition…

to a very special peep
bye4now
tc
jx

[sheep]

remember i,m true, in your hand i placed my soul, hold my fire hold me and in the love have precious mercy on my heart don,t break me today i love you

[Druid]

This poem is dedicated to all those caring people who give up their lives to give the little ones a fighting chance to be a family again.

A bouncing ball,
A kick to the right
Got the clipped ear
Almost a fight..
Where’s your father boy?

The dolly in tatters
Dried tears swell the thread
There is no hug
So instead brush her head…
Where’s your mother lass?

At night in the dorm
Dark lies grow strong
Fears fastened in terror
To a new scrubbed up day
Where have they gone?

Queuing and washing
All pressed sterile linen
Until through the glass
A warm mothers caring?
Don’t stare or they don’t want you!

Through a doors glass
Visitors care with no painful glare
Tears slowly well inside eyes shining
Both parties wanting
Hug, hold, be loved and be told,
Here’s your new father lass.
Here’s your new mother boy

Druid

[Druid]

Excellent work, the second verse was a complete turn around in the characters survival and need to strive forward.

Good read femme thanks for sharing

Dru

[minim]

Domino effect

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[minim]

:)

[minim]

Too soon

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[Druid]

“Dropping into an ocean of scattered dreams”.

Excellent mims, excellent words indeed.

I wrote this shortly after I was driving into Penzance on a warm misty summers morning about 8am, St Michael’s Mount had just come into view….

I called it,

Misty Atmosphere’s.

This natural delight…

Heat licks at my skin
As damp enters in,
to my soul as it looks
At this eerie sight..

Birds cease to chatter
Insects leave no clatter
Silence clouds this spot
Where souls have passed

I breath in this scene
I wonder how many
thoughts it provoked
In ages past

An ageless sight
In prehistoric might
Opens my imagination to
This natural delight

I cast my present sight
Where many have trod.
others took flight
And in one breath

…………the world will be right.

“May your soul always be wrapped in the warm preciousness of love”.

Druid

[minim]

That is a beautiful poem druid.

And thank you xxxx
mims

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