Poetry Threat (well ok thread!) mark 2

[HermanGRRRman]

All very nice lyrics, but I reckon this limerick might match the rest……

I was drunk and got into trouble,
Im usually all nice and lovable.
One night on the town,
I pulled my pants down,
So everyone saw my fat chubble!

:P

[Cymorill]

i sit here unnoticed, unseen, watching others
playing out the highs and lows of their lives
waiting to be discovered, waiting to experiance
that which seems alien to me.

it’s easy to find me if you look hard enough
i’m the one in the corner with the pierrot frown
hiding my tears with a smile and a joke
the one who leaves on her own every night

perhaps my disguise is too clever or cunning
perhaps my mask is too carefully worn
or perhaps i was always meant to be
the unnoticed, the unseen, the shadow on the wall.

[Druid]

@minim wrote:

@druid wrote:

I saw this thread and considered posting here for ages, I have a number of poems I composed some time back, this one seems relevent.

On achieving connection by Druid

Scented breeze
Wafts whitened folds
Hung at your portals
As I gaze into your stare
Do you see me here?

Your emerald eyes reflect
In crystal cut vision
My reflection so clear
In your damp lucid eyes

I feel your touch
Caressesing my soul
Of your soft silken fingers
As they reach a goal

But then you stab
Your weary frustration
And I sear full of pain
As it races my core

I flicker in your eyes
As you once more smile
I am pleased at this moment
I gave you, your desire…

Until the next time
You want me to connect
To your favourite site
On the world’s Internet……

I love this…. a beautiful piece of writing. I particularly like the phrases “carressing my soul” and “in crystal cut vision”. And I knew exactly what you mean by “sear full of pain”. Thank you for sharing.

xxx

Thank you for those kind words Minim, I had not realised this had been read and commented upon, thank you, here is another, in a ‘tasteful’ vein

For whom do I cry for I cry for you

The wind cries
As I swoop
The chilled night
My companion
To seek and find
As now my hunger
After the warmth
Of the suns musk
The city below
In cut glass view
Beckons in haste
To a bloody taste!
My meal appears
In silk and fur
Hurriedly on foot
A darkened pier we meet
And, “excuse me miss?”
“Do I know you sir?”
“You knew me ma’am”
“And who may you be
on this cold cold night?”
In hunger I strike
No time to waste
As I satisfy
A gluttonous taste
Drained and limp
New lifeless victim
Fell from my hand
As I scream once more
For this is my fate
Since my first taint
To drain your flesh
To discard my plate..

[wilma]

Em the cat sat on the mat

[sunshine1]

the cat sat on the mat
the cat sat on the flufffy mat
on the fluffy mat the cat sat
on the mat on the mat
the …….. cat………… sat……
it was……………….. fluffy.

[Oss]

@sunshine1 wrote:

the cat sat on the mat
the cat sat on the flufffy mat
on the fluffy mat the cat sat
on the mat on the mat
the …….. cat………… sat……
it was……………….. fluffy.

I learnt that aswell :lol: :lol:

when i was 4 :wink:

[wilma]

:)

[Cymorill]

ignore the fools wilma, your words were beautiful as always :)

[sunshine1]

oi pml i wasnt taking the p’s out of ure poem ddnt even read it yet lol, that poem was about my cat I LOVE MY CAT i do i do i do…….. :lol: :lol: :lol:

just read you poem now and it is lovely, but made me feel sad…..

so i read my cat poem again to cheer me up…. and tut oss the one u learned at four had no fluffy mat in it….. mine has

took me ages to think of tht one tut lol well 3 mins but still………..

[wilma]

@cymorill wrote:

ignore the fools wilma, your words were beautiful as always :)

Thanks cymoril, but tis time to delete them :)
Your poems are excellent ….keep on writing.

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