Poetry Threat (well ok thread!) mark 2

[minim]

@sharongooner wrote:

@minim wrote:

Well it’s Saturday night.. so here goes….

The Nightclub

Coats and bags retrieved in haste,
as into the darkness the Saturday girls flow.
Amidst gales of laughter they link arms and share umbrellas
in that habitual rush to hurry home.
Grab a hasty snack,
Hurtle upstairs!
A bath, then wrapped in ‘gowns the Saturday night ritual begins.
Hair arranged, make-up applied until each masterpiece is ready
To be wrapped in creations that dazzle and blind.
Cheery calls of bye and don’t be late,
Then into the night, eyes sparkling, laughing and radiant,
Heels clicking on pavements still slick from the earlier rain.
A bus ride and a few drinks later, and at last the queue is joined.
They all file in with calls and gestures, jostling for position.
Coats exchanged for tickets as they descend into darkness together
Following the insistent steady pulse of raw dance music.
Then out onto the dance floor, arms and hips swaying as the rhythmic pulse
permeates to their very bones.
Frenzied energy dissipates in time, and pulses begin to race to a different beat,
As with eyes half closed, beads of sweat on brows, and lost in music,
They bump and grind.
Strobes light faces, as would be lovers strain to converse,
Watching lips for clues, moving ever nearer until bodies touch and
With lip to ear in desperation they struggle to make contact.
The air heavy with the smell of sex and smoke,
hips and thighs meld, and mesmerized they sway together as the last dance is played.

i like this too (sorry its an old thread, but i really really like this one!)

Thank you sharongooner !!! :D

[minim]

Crones Disease

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[wilma]

:D Well don’t go to the pub with that lot again.

They sound like a right bundle of laughs.
:D

[minim]

:D :lol: :lol: Could be a scene from Coros !!!!

[minim]

hmmmm, not happy about the last line, might edit that at some point.

[cath 55]

@lorraine wrote:

i really like that poem cath ..its how i feel quite often :) x

thanx lorraine xx hugs xxx

[cath 55]

well here i am at the end of sunday
got to go to work tommorow cos it monday
i checked and rechecked my lottery ticket
but not a penny so i’ve got to stick it!!!

hey ho the weekend goes so quick
do you know when i would work if i had to pick
i would work saturday and sunday
and the days in the week ? well they would be fundays!

[cath 55]

for my mumxx

dearest mum the pain never completely goes
from my head to my heart and all the way to my toes
i miss you sometimes more than others
we all should appreciate our mothers
coz when they are gone its just to late
to cuddle, to love them, for them to wave to you at the gate
as your’e going off to school or shopping or out with freinds
the love from your mum just never ever ends.

Oh mum I’m missing you so much tonite
for the cuddle, how safe i felt when you held me to tight
I can even now smell your perfume
so potent so real its here in my room
Oh mum you actually could never be
totally completely there for me
but you know what mum I dont blame you
the love that you could give has left me still wanting you.

Dearest mum, we didnt always agree
mums and kids aren’t supposed you see
but mum dont you ever have any doubt
i never thought i would ever have to do without
without your cuddles that made me feel so warm and safe
and I took them for granted, oh what a mistake
but you know what mum i feel you are near
and I know you loved me mum and that I will always hold dear.

goodnite mum god bless , I make no apologies she was my mum and tho we never got to spend as much time together as i have been lucky enough to do with my kids sometimes i just miss her soooooo much xxxxxx

[sunny]

F00k me caff that was lovely

Will be me second christmas with out mine and it gets f00king harder not easyer

Tell ya what had a row on hubs other night and miss phoning her telling her all about what a prat he is and a wa nk e r lol just for me mom to say bab he is a good lad your a hard bleeder to live with lol

Was always on his side lol

My heart gos out to you because when you have a day of missing them it hurts like hell

So il give ya one of them hug things you give every 1 eles (((((((caff)))))))))))))))))

[cath 55]

@sunny wrote:

F00k me caff that was lovely

Will be me second christmas with out mine and it gets f00king harder not easyer

Tell ya what had a row on hubs other night and miss phoning her telling her all about what a prat he is and a wa nk e r lol just for me mom to say bab he is a good lad your a hard bleeder to live with lol

Was always on his side lol

My heart gos out to you because when you have a day of missing them it hurts like hell

So il give ya one of them hug things you give every 1 eles (((((((caff)))))))))))))))))

thanx suns ur a star !!!! hugsters xxxoxoxooxxo

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