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    Forget Me Not, you are becoming a prodigious poet. You have great energy, and some fine ideas, but it is time to move beyond your natural ability, and delve in to the craftsmanship of writing a poem. Neither youth, nor haste can be an excuse, anymore. If you feel you are worth it, that the reader is worth it, then you must mine some of those synapses that are eagerly awaiting your introduction.

    Stephen

    #306745

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    #306746

    hiding in the shadows
    i know your’e there somewhere
    you were in sight not so long ago
    I saw you, I felt you, so i know
    I know you were here , so vivid and so clear
    and yet you deserted me when i needed you most.

    where were you when I was sick
    when my hair went from black to silver
    I can see you oh so clearly
    with your sparkling eyes
    I see you running now, your face so full of life
    and yet you deserted me when i needed you most.

    Looking at you now , as u come out of hiding
    seeing your reflection
    you did desert me but
    i dont how i didnt notice
    you leaving and drifting
    up and away to the chapters of time

    but as I see your reflection
    its not really so bad
    of course you deserted me
    but what a life i had!
    and now as i move a little more slowly
    and take longer to dress
    the memories of you
    will never desert me
    and yet………

    #306747

    That’s beautiful Cath.. :cry:

    #306748

    I look on and watch silently
    Your every move noted
    Your every word memorised
    You don’t know I control you
    Yet I follow your every action
    Watching, waiting, silently brooding
    A pleasant front a harmless face
    You will come to trust me
    Though at times you wonder
    A pricking of conscience
    A wondering glance
    Just what am I really up too?
    You’ll never be sure
    Yet soon too late
    The knowledge will come
    Awareness will awake
    The silken threads will bind you
    Soft yet unbreakable
    Unlike your will
    For I will mould you
    Remove your freedom
    Make you my slave to serve at my whim
    All will be mine
    Never yours again
    You’ve already lost
    You just don’t know it
    You thought me the servant
    Now I’m the master
    The omnipotent state!

    #306749

    Prayer

    And so what was well
    Never shall be.
    Again, unnatural day.
    Night seemed certain at least,
    Yet the chrome cemetary grey
    Wrought no steel, no twilight mechanism
    To soothe too soon a finality.
    Huge singular tear pool from your eye
    Like a clear blood (my blood) splashing,
    Crashing into the plain normality of your shoe.
    For all that was then seems strange fabric –
    That something else from me again,
    Your sullen little brother again –
    My head bowed with speech defeated,
    As we stared, sunken at the grave of childhood.

    Oh I only have this!
    I have only this!
    Plough all knowing from my path,
    For too shrill is the music.
    Too cold the breath mist on the mirror.
    Too freakish is the faith sequence,
    Too manic the extant lull of acceptance.
    Let Saviours come with the wherewithal
    Or lets beaches boil their oceans bare,
    Bleached to the naked physic.
    Let Gods and science alike get fucked to their high heavens
    And finally feel the angry earth batter
    Every aspiration of an age!
    Rape, lay waste the hard and sensitive tragedy.
    Scream with innocence the death of Adam’s fall,
    For too often we call Human!
    Too oft administer all
    To the assembled accident of the ammoniacal soup.
    Nor shall the wavering cross of conscious and conscience
    In some form of healing hour longer be.
    No.
    Let sickness itself,
    Yet another bastard born of us
    Suckle from it’s whore mother of retention,
    Time.
    Then, let it be.

    For what more must it make
    To break the hate music now,
    Born from Requiems then?
    Unnatural ways.
    For all comes after the past.
    After the past is gone.

    Amen

    #306750

    behold!
    ignorance wrought
    as prophecy.
    denied dreams caught
    from the ether
    of insanity

    argumentative bliss
    resurrected from
    post-capitalist
    boredom

    watch the decay
    of time as it slips
    through my fingers
    the liquid cancer
    whose scent still lingers.

    Wilted flowers on the breath,
    the stench of death
    well known to gilted hearts
    wrapped in poison ivy

    I played my part
    ill-fated chimera
    dancing on a knife’s edge
    unaware that the end was much nearer.
    The song by the moth
    as it burned in the flame

    #306751

    Wow, Sgt., Forget Me Not, bummer man.

    Stephen

    #306752

    I sold my soul for the 7th time

    #306753

    @Sgt Pepper wrote:

    Prayer

    And so what was well
    Never shall be.
    Again, unnatural day.
    Night seemed certain at least,
    Yet the chrome cemetary grey
    Wrought no steel, no twilight mechanism
    To soothe too soon a finality.
    Huge singular tear pool from your eye
    Like a clear blood (my blood) splashing,
    Crashing into the plain normality of your shoe.
    For all that was then seems strange fabric –
    That something else from me again,
    Your sullen little brother again –
    My head bowed with speech defeated,
    As we stared, sunken at the grave of childhood.

    Oh I only have this!
    I have only this!
    Plough all knowing from my path,
    For too shrill is the music.
    Too cold the breath mist on the mirror.
    Too freakish is the faith sequence,
    Too manic the extant lull of acceptance.
    Let Saviours come with the wherewithal
    Or lets beaches boil their oceans bare,
    Bleached to the naked physic.
    Let Gods and science alike get fucked to their high heavens
    And finally feel the angry earth batter
    Every aspiration of an age!
    Rape, lay waste the hard and sensitive tragedy.
    Scream with innocence the death of Adam’s fall,
    For too often we call Human!
    Too oft administer all
    To the assembled accident of the ammoniacal soup.
    Nor shall the wavering cross of conscious and conscience
    In some form of healing hour longer be.
    No.
    Let sickness itself,
    Yet another bastard born of us
    Suckle from it’s whore mother of retention,
    Time.
    Then, let it be.

    For what more must it make
    To break the hate music now,
    Born from Requiems then?
    Unnatural ways.
    For all comes after the past.
    After the past is gone.

    Amen

    A stunning, salvific work of sheer shining brilliance!

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