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Automaton
stuck in the routine
just an ends to a mean
without redound or reaction
no originality in action
or thought
caught
in another’s machinations
embedded in karmic rotations
tick-tock
I’m a gear in a clock
amounting to nothing more
and nothing less…
(and then I stop
and do it all again):idea:
Depths of thought which I
could never hope to achieve
I bow to your skill@Forget Me Not wrote:
Depths of thought which I
could never hope to achieve
I bow to your skillAway and raffle! Even you could do better!
@esmeralda wrote:
@Forget Me Not wrote:
Depths of thought which I
could never hope to achieve
I bow to your skillAway and raffle! Even you could do better!
What do you mean…”even you”….. I think forget me not writes very well.
@minim wrote:
@esmeralda wrote:
@Forget Me Not wrote:
Depths of thought which I
could never hope to achieve
I bow to your skillAway and raffle! Even you could do better!
What do you mean…”even you”….. I think forget me not writes very well.
You would.
Forget Me Not knows what I think, he is a sensitive and gentle young man, who perhaps one day will learn to craft a fine piece of work, but not if he gets praised for twaddle.And you are a leading authority in twaddle.
I like twaddle. Its what I learn from
Sorry Esme, but none of us is perfect… to many egos on here I think x
@minim wrote:
And you are a leading authority in twaddle.
Actually, I’m a leading authority on poetry.
In the grand scheme of it all, isn’t a lot of things in life twaddle, interspersed with those few fleeting moments of utter clarity when this chaotic mess of a universe makes sense… or something
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