Poetry in motion

Stanza and deliver
Ya money or ya life :P

@sharongooner wrote:

@esmeralda wrote:

@Forget Me Not wrote:

are you referring to that poem in particular or are you talking about the whole lot? because what I usually do is write it then edit it so that it flows better

rewrite the last stanza..take your time..then come back to me.
:wink:

I feel an A* coming on today for someone… go, go forget me not, and come back for your applause!

There’s no rush!!!!!!!! :roll:

IDOL
(or A New Paradise for True Beginners)

O come, all ye faithless!
And so I was,
And so I did.
Forgive me Father, for I have sinned.
This was my first digression.

Click.

You see, on my third day from Thirty
A true love said to me..
Brb.
Parting of the bed, see?
Holocaust of silence.
He brewed for himself
His own basket case.
Weaved from water and other such
Urgencies of thirst,
Fluid in steady recline.

.. So here I came, uh huh,
And it reminded me of running the ranch fields of Inchicore –
The freedom of being Twelve..
Tribes, thousands on screen.
Taurean,
Synaesthesia en masse.
Sinai language, commanding,
Shattering tableaus.
Click – handsome hound.
Click – clever cad.
Click – funny fecker.
Click me out, baby.

By morning with boy-legs like a new born foal,
In the all is awe brightness of a dew.
Fragile child of day..
.. Awake all night,
Uber Ram’s Horn for the herd.
Malefactor,
Mocking with merchant tongue
The few you fuck unfettered.
Burning many a bush but bridges kept intact.
Holy Moses…

Then,
You..

From true mountain descent.
Fate bringer, through bringing a faith restored.
Wielding woman’s wounds like a sword,
So that all that previous death dies,
Destroyed through the comfort and gentile glory
Of a knowing Resurrection.

for this life, what of it
why
why do we exist
why do we
not value
what we have
why do we
mourn
for those things we do not have
why spend
what precious time
on the
what if’s
on the if only
on things
we
cannot
change

cherish
cherish?
what a funny word
it rolls
off the tongue
but
it ends
in an ish
what of
the ish’s
of this life
dont think
just do
just do what
you want
whatever
makes
you , yes you
feel good

just do
the what if’s
a wise person
once said
never regret
the things
you didnt do
you know just
what i’m talking
about…….

be true
be true to you
to your soul
try it
you will never know
if it was
worth it
if
you don’t

so get out there
we could be
this way
no matter what
your belief’s
only once
live
every day
just do it……….