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Adversus incendia excubias nocturnas vigilesque commentus est
For are those who write, love and live poetry not the true sentinels of the age?
Thank you so much for the kind words Esme x and Cym x.
I am truly humbled :oops: .. and that’s a rare Pepper phenomenon, believe me :)@Sgt Pepper wrote:
Adversus incendia excubias nocturnas vigilesque commentus est
For are those who write, love and live poetry not the true sentinels of the age?
Thank you so much for the kind words Esme x and Cym x.
I am truly humbled :oops: .. and that’s a rare Pepper phenomenon, believe me :)You really are an extremely dark horse! :wink:
I read that piece back the other night when you posted it (before any replies) and assumed it was by a famous poet, but you had omitted to give credit to them.
Wow, amazing stuff dude 8)
Sarge Rocks!!!!
Once more it is back
to haikus for me as the
master has arrivedFrustration,
deliberation,
procrastination,
I put off the inevitableBut I hear it still,
the whisper roars
through my mind
demanding that I face
my own demons from the past‘No no’ says I
to my tormentor
‘my soul, heart and mind
shall not be yours today’
as I beg it quite fervently
to just go away…
… but it will be back,
it will always come backto dream of that
which never was
to see that which
fails to be perceivedthe concept eludes me
as an eel in the half-light
writhing and squirming
from out of my grip
refusing enlightenmenthidden in the ether
both the answer and question
realms through which
I can only dream to journeyMayhaps one day
I might travel there
when life is again beautiful
and I have not a carei agree shazza i thought it was someone elses work
impressed so i am mr pepps
and forget me not ur words are very deep and meaningful keep it up xxI’m still cleaning up my scattered grey matter after sarge blew my mind
scattered thoughts on the
breeze which passes through my mind.
Answers lie withinwho is that?
who calls my name?
what do you want?
what is your game?are you redemption
sent on silken soft wings?
or are you a demon
come to say sinful things?whoever you are
whatever your tone
nothing can you say to me
would outweigh my own
sense of loss@Forget Me Not wrote:
who is that?
who calls my name?
what do you want?It’s me..Esme..and I want you to go back and re-write some..well actually ALL of it!
are you referring to that poem in particular or are you talking about the whole lot? because what I usually do is write it then edit it so that it flows better
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