Poetry in motion

from the depth
of my soul
my soul
so precious
the only thing
i own
or do I?
who exactly
owns my soul
do you
do I?
does the very
devil himself
own it
does the gracious power
of that thing
i call god
own it?
or do you?
whoever you are…………

@Forget Me Not wrote:

I state my thoughts here
almost every day
it gives me joy, deeply
veiled within my apparant dismay

For here I know
my voice can be heard
my own demons drowned out
so I can get in a word

Fate undecided
Time still has to tell
but may I say that now I care not
whether I go to Heaven or to Hell

For in this perfect moment
I find idyllic bliss
the support of dear true friends
shall never go amiss

and that, dear reader, means more
to me than you can ever know
my heart goes out to you all
with intent pure and emotions aglow

{{{{{{{{{{forget me not}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}

oh your all just showing off now
cos we all had a beer
well you may not
but I have
dont stop,
me keeping ya near

@sharongooner wrote:

@Forget Me Not wrote:

the seconds stretch into eternity,
looking at a blank screen.
Indescision and doubt
cascade through my mind

The perfect words so hard to find
tentatively my fingers reach out
blindly searching for my muse
with each falling keystroke

“Oh what a joke…”
whispers some part of my mind
“thinking that perfection comes
with the passing of mortal time”

difficult to find the rhyme
to cease my own unrest
becoming harder to auger
the next stanza…
… though I try my best

stop fighting yourself
all you can do is your best
dont frown
your head will come down

stanza’s are great
but a little far fetched
everybody can write
what we say is the catch

poo pooing yourself
is not the road
for a talent that is clear
and that is your own

I appreciate it
though I dont always say
but I read your thoughts
every day x

ditto to all ya x