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  • #198175

    Sorry Cymorill, I for one was not being critical, merely Observant. :wink:

    I have made my own version of ‘October Night’

    On a crisp October night
    I stood in some dog poo
    It was definitely shyte
    As I smelt it on my shoe

    Critique away :lol:

    #198176

    :lol: :lol: needs more work see me after class. :wink:

    right enough spamming on someones creative efforts. :)

    #198177

    Yes, you are right Cymorill :oops:

    I apologise Angelwolf :(

    I will go find a pathetics corner somewhere…….

    It’s like a poets corner only errmm less poetic :twisted:

    #198178

    Well I’m certainly no poet, but I really liked it, is it about a Vampire?

    #198179


    Thanks Angel!!

    Yes it is a vampire poem..I am a big Anne Rice fan! Have read all her books…

    Angelwolf

    #198180

    @angelwolf00 wrote:


    Thanks Angel!!

    Yes it is a vampire poem..I am a big Anne Rice fan! Have read all her books…

    Angelwolf

    I found your poem quite captivating AW……I love anything to do with Vampires myself, but unfortunately do not read, I am far to lazy and don’t have the patience…..I have seen Interview with a Vampire though and loved it!!!!

    #198181

    Didnt see it all, it scared to cr@p outta me

    Lovely poem xxx

    #198182

    @*Dawny* wrote:

    Didnt see it all, it scared to cr@p outta me

    Lovely poem xxx

    LOL dawny, wouldn’t you just love Antonio Banderas or Brad Pitt to bite your neck tho :wink: :lol:

    #198183

    No thanx :-…

    #198184

    @*Dawny* wrote:

    No thanx :-…

    :lol: :lol: :lol:

    U near your phone hun?

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