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And this is why i don’t write no more :lol: :lol:
Amy was a lovely looking girl
with an intelligent mind
At the age of 16
her death warrant she signedshe met a man
who’s name was Bob
she didn’t know
drugs were his jobthe man excites her
in so many ways
he takes her out
and always payspocket full of money
and covered in gold.
if only she’d listened
to what she was toldthe mans a dealer
that’s why he’s rich
give it a month
he’ll be calling you b*tchhe’ll get you on the crack
the smack and the dope
when that happens
there will be no hopeAmy wouldn’t listen
to people that knew
Amy wanted to do
what he wanted to doshe goes to live with him
to make a point
him showing her the art
of rolling a jointhe offers her a puff
which she doesn’t want to take
have a puff
for goodness sakeshe takes a puff
it goes straight to her head
the next thing she knows
she’s with him in bedno longer a virgin
and smoked an illegal drug
he turns away
without even a hugthe mans a dealer
that’s why his rich
give it a month
he’ll be calling you b*tchhe’ll get you on the crack
the smack and the dope
when that happens
there will be no hopeAmy knows he loves her
even thought he’s got all slack
he treats her to crack
and introduced her to smackher habit forms,
she likes the smack
B*TCH YOU A LIABILITY
YOUR BAGS ARE PACKEDAmy now sad
and all on her own
no friends no family
not even a homeshe finds a squat
that’s riddled with damp
her looks are all shabby
she looks like a trampAmy needs smack
and there’s nothing to eat
she needs money
so she hits the streetsselling tricks from a street corner
in the freezing cold
if only she had listened
to what she was toldthe mans a dealer
that’s why his rich
give it a month
he’ll be calling you b*tchhe’ll get you on the crack
the smack and the dope
when that happens
there will be no hopeshe gets to her dealer
god she feels rough
fumbling her money
to buy some stuffshe gets home
boils up her gear
tie round her arm
fag behind her earlooking for a vein
which don’t wanna be found
lets hit and hope
the needles inboundit’s got her
it’s in her vein
it goes through her body
to her brainshe lays back
and falls asleep
her breathing stops
a tear she weepsthe end
M.U.N you should write more, I found that a very powerful poem actually, especially written at such a tender age, and very true to life too I mite add, well done! :)
@angel* wrote:
M.U.N you should write more, I found that a very powerful poem actually, especially written at such a tender age, and very true to life too I mite add, well done! :)
writting real life sad stuff was easy……. I had 5 or 600 poem’s people wanted to make some of them into songs ect :roll:
All i ever wanted to do was write, but they made me sad and M.U.N don’t like being sad :lol: :lol:
@Made up name wrote:
@angel* wrote:
M.U.N you should write more, I found that a very powerful poem actually, especially written at such a tender age, and very true to life too I mite add, well done! :)
writting real life sad stuff was easy……. I had 5 or 600 poem’s people wanted to make some of them into songs ect :roll:
All i ever wanted to do was write, but they made me sad and M.U.N don’t like being sad :lol: :lol:
oh :oops: and thank you :wink:
=D> =D> =D>
Wow that was deep, good poem. Would make a even better song. 8)
@Made up name wrote:
@angel* wrote:
M.U.N you should write more, I found that a very powerful poem actually, especially written at such a tender age, and very true to life too I mite add, well done! :)
writting real life sad stuff was easy……. I had 5 or 600 poem’s people wanted to make some of them into songs ect :roll:
All i ever wanted to do was write, but they made me sad and M.U.N don’t like being sad :lol: :lol:
Isn’t it funny how most poems are written from a heavy heart……I’d like to see more of your work here hun :D xx
@angel* wrote:
@Made up name wrote:
@angel* wrote:
M.U.N you should write more, I found that a very powerful poem actually, especially written at such a tender age, and very true to life too I mite add, well done! :)
writting real life sad stuff was easy……. I had 5 or 600 poem’s people wanted to make some of them into songs ect :roll:
All i ever wanted to do was write, but they made me sad and M.U.N don’t like being sad :lol: :lol:
Isn’t it funny how most poems are written from a heavy heart……I’d like to see more of your work here hun :D xx
I was a deep child :lol: always thinking, watching, learning. I’m happy i’ve lightened up over the years :lol:
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