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    I tried
    I gave you my freedom
    when I talked to you
    you cried
    and gave me no reason
    but I know I’m not good enough
    to be loved by someone like you

    I hide
    I gave you my story
    you couldn’t find me
    but did you try?
    all I heard was ‘sorry’
    sorry isn’t good enough
    when I fall in love
    with someone like you

    I cry
    I gave you my life
    but you never take
    you hide
    all I got was ‘goodbye’
    its all I ever heard
    no chorus just a verse
    followed by verse after verse

    its in my soul now
    and that’s where it hurts
    to know I’m not good enough
    to be loved by someone like you
    sorry its too late
    to say sorry
    and hear those words from you
    goodbye
    goodbye
    goodbye, don’t cry
    just hold me
    and lie me in your arms
    goodbye

    #105843

    Soulie in this life your are never “not good enough for someone”, if they dont like you for what you are then they are not worth the time of day and dont deserve your love, you have someone out there that needs and wants you and will love you, but you need to love yourself to, dont ever think your not worthy of someones love, your worth a lot more and one day someone will show you that :wink:

    #105844

    dont really know you soulie, but the following to temp’

    =D> =D> =D> =D> =D> =D> =D>

    soulie, a very good poem wether you meant it or just wrote it.

    #105845

    u know i hate it when u say u rnt good enough hun
    u know what i have to say on the matter u r a fab guy with a lot to offer and like tempty said theres someone out there waiting for u to love them and give them what u have to offer , ull gind that someone one day soon.
    never give up hun x

    #105846

    somtimes to love yourself can be the hardest thing you can ever do, to have confidence can be somthing only gained by loving yourself i feel

    the poem was’nt about anyone really.. just my experiance of relationships.. and how they hav’nt worked.. mainly due to MY faults.. and i admit that and take the blame.. but somtimes as part of the poem was meant to say.. somtimes i wish the other person would give somthing back to me, so i can work on my faults.. they end up justing running away some place and moving on

    hope that makes sense :)

    happy friday :D… i got in touch with clare today, thanks for gb’s advice :) and got a positive reply .. so feeling a lot better .. and hopefully with that, i can find out where i went wrong.. and maybe she don’t wanna say goodbye for good just yet

    #105847

    glad to hear it soulie
    u see i am good at some things, like handing out sound advice :wink:

    #105848

    you’re a star hun :D

    #105849

    hey julie i try and tell him this all the time but does he liste? no he bloody doesnt
    trust me he is a great guy in ‘real’ life too :wink:

    #105850

    thanks people :oops:

    #105851

    i did get the idea from better then before… yep…. :D and maybe i nicked a line or too… to save confusion.. i shall post the lyics to better then before by ocean colour scene

    got my freedom i talk to you
    but i just cant explain
    yes i need someone to talk to
    but my heart gets in the way

    its much better than before
    so much better than before
    but my heart wont let me say
    that its better than before

    take your free love then i run from you
    and the games that we all play
    now its you i need to run to
    but my heart gets in the way

    ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

    its much better than before
    so much better than before
    but my heart wont let me say
    that its better than before

    freedom i run to you
    my heart just can’t explain
    that its better than before
    better than before
    so much better than before

    its much better than before
    so much better than before
    but my heart wont let me say
    is that its better than before

    :D

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