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10 March, 2005 at 11:30 pm #439
I tried
I gave you my freedom
when I talked to you
you cried
and gave me no reason
but I know I’m not good enough
to be loved by someone like youI hide
I gave you my story
you couldn’t find me
but did you try?
all I heard was ‘sorry’
sorry isn’t good enough
when I fall in love
with someone like youI cry
I gave you my life
but you never take
you hide
all I got was ‘goodbye’
its all I ever heard
no chorus just a verse
followed by verse after verseits in my soul now
and that’s where it hurts
to know I’m not good enough
to be loved by someone like you
sorry its too late
to say sorry
and hear those words from you
goodbye
goodbye
goodbye, don’t cry
just hold me
and lie me in your arms
goodbye11 March, 2005 at 12:14 am #105843Soulie in this life your are never “not good enough for someone”, if they dont like you for what you are then they are not worth the time of day and dont deserve your love, you have someone out there that needs and wants you and will love you, but you need to love yourself to, dont ever think your not worthy of someones love, your worth a lot more and one day someone will show you that :wink:
11 March, 2005 at 12:20 am #105844dont really know you soulie, but the following to temp’
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soulie, a very good poem wether you meant it or just wrote it.
11 March, 2005 at 9:54 am #105845u know i hate it when u say u rnt good enough hun
u know what i have to say on the matter u r a fab guy with a lot to offer and like tempty said theres someone out there waiting for u to love them and give them what u have to offer , ull gind that someone one day soon.
never give up hun x11 March, 2005 at 2:15 pm #105846somtimes to love yourself can be the hardest thing you can ever do, to have confidence can be somthing only gained by loving yourself i feel
the poem was’nt about anyone really.. just my experiance of relationships.. and how they hav’nt worked.. mainly due to MY faults.. and i admit that and take the blame.. but somtimes as part of the poem was meant to say.. somtimes i wish the other person would give somthing back to me, so i can work on my faults.. they end up justing running away some place and moving on
hope that makes sense :)
happy friday :D… i got in touch with clare today, thanks for gb’s advice :) and got a positive reply .. so feeling a lot better .. and hopefully with that, i can find out where i went wrong.. and maybe she don’t wanna say goodbye for good just yet
11 March, 2005 at 2:26 pm #105847glad to hear it soulie
u see i am good at some things, like handing out sound advice :wink:11 March, 2005 at 3:00 pm #105848you’re a star hun :D
11 March, 2005 at 3:29 pm #105849hey julie i try and tell him this all the time but does he liste? no he bloody doesnt
trust me he is a great guy in ‘real’ life too :wink:11 March, 2005 at 3:33 pm #105850thanks people :oops:
12 March, 2005 at 7:30 pm #105851i did get the idea from better then before… yep…. :D and maybe i nicked a line or too… to save confusion.. i shall post the lyics to better then before by ocean colour scene
got my freedom i talk to you
but i just cant explain
yes i need someone to talk to
but my heart gets in the wayits much better than before
so much better than before
but my heart wont let me say
that its better than beforetake your free love then i run from you
and the games that we all play
now its you i need to run to
but my heart gets in the wayohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
its much better than before
so much better than before
but my heart wont let me say
that its better than beforefreedom i run to you
my heart just can’t explain
that its better than before
better than before
so much better than beforeits much better than before
so much better than before
but my heart wont let me say
is that its better than before:D
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