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    When Lil’s husband got demobbed, I said—
    I didn’t mince my words, I said to her myself, 140
    HURRY UP PLEASE IT’S TIME
    Now Albert’s coming back, make yourself a bit smart.
    He’ll want to know what you done with that money he gave you
    To get yourself some teeth. He did, I was there.
    You have them all out, Lil, and get a nice set, 145
    He said, I swear, I can’t bear to look at you.
    And no more can’t I, I said, and think of poor Albert,
    He’s been in the army four years, he wants a good time,
    And if you don’t give it him, there’s others will, I said.
    Oh is there, she said. Something o’ that, I said. 150
    Then I’ll know who to thank, she said, and give me a straight look.
    HURRY UP PLEASE IT’S TIME
    If you don’t like it you can get on with it, I said.
    Others can pick and choose if you can’t.
    But if Albert makes off, it won’t be for lack of telling. 155
    You ought to be ashamed, I said, to look so antique.
    (And her only thirty-one.)
    I can’t help it, she said, pulling a long face,
    It’s them pills I took, to bring it off, she said.
    (She’s had five already, and nearly died of young George.) 160
    The chemist said it would be alright, but I’ve never been the same.
    You are a proper fool, I said.
    Well, if Albert won’t leave you alone, there it is, I said,
    What you get married for if you don’t want children?
    HURRY UP PLEASE IT’S TIME 165
    Well, that Sunday Albert was home, they had a hot gammon,
    And they asked me in to dinner, to get the beauty of it hot—
    HURRY UP PLEASE IT’S TIME
    HURRY UP PLEASE IT’S TIME
    Goonight Bill. Goonight Lou. Goonight May. Goonight. 170
    Ta ta. Goonight. Goonight.
    Good night, ladies, good night, sweet ladies, good night, good night.

    #455197

    Oh! To have a passion so clear,
    Where mocking becomes easy my love,
    To crush that which is dear,
    Only to release the dove,
    Into the wilderness that is poetry.

    Words are ther to be used :)

    #455198

    Art, Poetry, Music & Film
    Are you the next Shakespeare? What did you think of the latest Hollywood Blockbuster? Share your own creations or discuss the work of others.

    It’s about sharing your own work or work of others that have touched you in some way and you want to share. It’s not about just copying poems willy nilly.

    Thank you for sharing that Cath, it made me go and revisit the rest of the poem, haven’t read it in a long time.

    #455199

    yeah cosy sure made a prat of himself here.

    I liked what you posted about the bank clerk cath. I did the same link on pepp’s thread once, and think I understood what Eliot was getting at. Modern life = the wasteland, only a hundred years earlier from where we are now.

    Old time stuff when 18 year old girls would have all their teeth taken out for a life of porcelain. This describes about four of my great aunts.

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