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  • 25 February, 2006 at 11:47 pm #3070

    William_A_Edge

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    26 February, 2006 at 12:04 am #199863

    Oss

    Very Moral and unlike modern day relationships. Really liked the sense of duty to their prior commitments.

    Found it hard for the first couple of verses to get into it but it grew rapidly on me as i kept reading William mate. I really liked it :D

    26 February, 2006 at 12:33 am #199864

    o0neo

    That was brilliant Will, sweet joyful story completely understood and well timed ;-)

    26 February, 2006 at 10:29 am #199865

    angelwolf00



    Yes this poem is brilliant!! It’s like reading a paper-back novel, couldn’t wait to read the next verse. By the way lovely names you picked for the characters!! :D

    Angelwolf

    26 February, 2006 at 11:40 am #199866

    angel

    Absolutely wonderful William…..I really liked this verse……..

    “Secretly they dream
    Of each other oh so sweet
    And in a spiritual world
    Their souls do often meet”

    Made me think of someone…….

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