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5 September, 2017 at 2:50 am #1068141
go on put your new poem on love xx
5 September, 2017 at 3:28 am #1068143Such a cool wind blowing over me
I hear nothing but the music in my ears
And my inner predicament resonating within my head
Drowning out the music, I guess your heart soul and inner voice are always louder
And all the things they said about me are suddenly true
And all the things I didn’t want to believe are suddenly staring me in the face
I covered myself with a blanket, and im being covered still by another blanket by another.
To be so warm and so protected when no one ever protected me quite in the same way?
I am underestimated, berated, taken for a  fool understandably.
But my heart is strong and warm albeit it broken and distorted and fragmented and ruined.
I am the light that glows from a lighthouse stopping the boats from destroying themselves, I am the fire alarm that goes off when your cheese on toast is burning
I am the person talking you down from the ledge.
I am the one warning you when bad things happen.
But I am the one disregarded belittled and ignored.
I am seen as the puppet being held by invisible strings and dangled about aimlessly used for someone elses desires
Maybe that is true.
I was me before I am me now and I will still be me in the future.
Are things always what they appear to be?
My attempt to write this poem in my usual style that rhymes
Cool wind blowing over me, chilly air that I cannot see
The air that cools my skin, listening to the music that only I can hear
Information that only I know and only given to me
Drowning out my inner voice that is so loud and so clear
Cant do it…
Epic fail, I cannot translate my own poem into a more acceptable form.
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13 September, 2017 at 8:35 pm #1068899Cant do it… Epic fail, I cannot translate my own poem into a more acceptable form.
One of the most intelligent things said in jc.
The sign of a good poet is someone who is not happy with his/her work, is aware that it can be better.
Keep at it, Ms Mizz xxx
13 September, 2017 at 8:45 pm #1068901thank you xxx
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