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  • 18 October, 2017 at 6:56 pm #1075709

    king_strongbow

    Darkness is coming, already begun,
    Colder and darker, hour by hour,
    Air turning cold, bitter and bold,
    Red sky Ophelia, what a phenomenon,
    Maybe some snow, bring the country to hold,
    But let’s not be sad, spiteful or mad,
    It happens each year, heater up and just chat

    A lame attempt, but Mizzy has inspired me with all her poetry  :yes:

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    18 October, 2017 at 7:10 pm #1075712

    supreme overlord paigey

    Your poetry is like you awful

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    18 October, 2017 at 7:13 pm #1075713

    king_strongbow

    Thank you, your feedback has been noted, we appreciate your feedback greatly. If there is anything else we can help you with please do not hesitate to get back in touch.

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    18 October, 2017 at 7:18 pm #1075716

    Sairs73

    I liked it xx :)

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    king_strongbow
    18 October, 2017 at 7:23 pm #1075717

    JUSTNOTHING

    i seen a view i thought it looked nice, the first sentence is what i thought when i seen it the rest of the sentences are what i added to it, mine is in bold the non bold is from someone else –

    (it looks like fire leaking out the cloud

    Heaven met Hell

    He looked up and saw fire leaking out of the clouds,

    Thunderer rumbled as the angels screamed loud.

    then the fire became brighter and brighter

    Until the angels fell and the aky became lighter

    then something great shown thrw the shaken clouds

    slowy moving between the clouds

    it made gods virus stand and stare

    shocked at what they seen

    many fell down hitting on the floor like if some evil dragged them down,

    there eye lids closed as if they have been tired for days

    while others still there standing staring)

     

    (also i dont like writing and typing and i dont know many words, but anyway be honest i dont think it is a poem more of some pointless story)

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    18 October, 2017 at 7:35 pm #1075726

    lindaclemenza7

    Justnothing….nice, picture beautiful. Thanks for sharing

    18 October, 2017 at 7:37 pm #1075729

    lindaclemenza7

    King… nice for sharing.. umm some hidden talent supposexxx

    Good job…..

    18 October, 2017 at 7:40 pm #1075733

    king_strongbow

    Lol, translated that means total sh*t :) All good, I am not a poet… That was very nice JN, and the pic  :good:

    lindaclemenza7 wrote:

    King… nice for sharing.. umm some hidden talent supposexxx Good job…..

    18 October, 2017 at 8:30 pm #1075736

    lindaclemenza7

    King, translation, liked it silly. Where that come? Surprise me with ur talent often. Hee..xx

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    18 October, 2017 at 11:24 pm #1075768

    sceptical guy
    king_strongbow wrote:

    Lol, translated that means total sh*t :) All good, I am not a poet… That was very nice JN, and the pic :good:

    keep trying, King.

    Practice makes perfect.

     

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