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20 October, 2008 at 11:20 am #12058
NO SWANS ON LOCH SUNNART
(On the south side of the Ardnamurchan peninsula lies Loch Sunnart, with the island of Mull to the south west. Swans are never to be seen on this Loch, for as legend has it, in ancient times a young Celtic chieftain fell for a girl who was way below his social standing. His mother who was against the relationship cast a spell turning the girl into a swan, which the young chieftain killed whilst out hunting, only to see her return in death to her human form. The young chieftain then took his own life so they could rest together by Loch Sunnart. And no swans have been seen there since.)
He loved her beyond reason and without that sentiment
for she scrubbed his mother’s floors,
which by and by grew stickier
with venom
and maternal ire
that being of a faery kind
and warped to boot,
turned love into a dour and downy swanShorn winter woods that mutter to the sky
you saw it happen,
stood whispering askance
whilst feathers bled
and stained the Sunnart
black.
Still turn away those branches from the sight
and have him taste the dirk that slew;
bite down on steel
reclaim her soul
and drowse in ferns foreverSkim cygnus, skim on arctic bitten spans,
bold buffeted
and sheering on north winds;
Glen Borrodale
Camas Nan Gaell
whose sands,
call down the migrants from the clouds
to rock the waters
with their dolorous cries.©
20 October, 2008 at 11:29 am #384193Bonfire
Up and up
into a vein-coloured sky,
go wraiths and spectres
mabbled soft in shrouds of carbon,
mournful as the maws of wolves in supplication to their moon
which –
frowning with an eyebrow sea,
slings cold fish tears,
to dampen down
the badious bones and bavins
of a dying month.©
20 October, 2008 at 11:31 am #384194SHETTLESTON ROAD
The wee beige-bummed mongrel
patters past the Pizza-Palace,
pauses to pee
on a polystyrene carton,
pauses to sniff
at his balls,
then barrels-off across the road
doggedly,
taking the corner with a frivolous flounce
of a furbelow tail.
Dissonant in the distance,
the jingle jangle jolly
of an ice-cream van
clamouring through concrete,
clattering past the cordon
of a row of flats,
cutting
like a cutlass,
like a klaxon,
like the curdling colic grizzle
of a crying child.Someone’s growing rhubarb in a garden,
a hooded boy takes pot-shots with a sling.
The textile shop has a half-price sale,
a carpenter splits his thumb on a nail
and the girl in the sauna
removes her wedding ring.The wee beige-bummed mongrel
pooters past the Peking Palace,
pauses to poke
at a pile of paper wrappings,
pauses to lick
at his ar se,
then skittles-off across the street
snappily,
skirting a skoda with a fabulous flick
of a palatine paw.
Dubious in the distance
the piercing palilalia
of an ambulance
sheering through the city,
sanguiferous, saccadic
on a hill of bones,
scything
as a sickle,
as a scalpel,
as the howling scarlatina
of a dying child.©
20 October, 2008 at 2:20 pm #384195Excellent poetry. [-o<
21 October, 2008 at 12:20 pm #384196Thank you Terry..for a poetry hater you’re very kind. :wink:
21 October, 2008 at 9:30 pm #384197I agree.. truly a class apart Esme.
Thank you for the new piece that tops your thread. New in the context of posting it here of course.
A bittersweet, eternal lament.. with a truly astonishing final verse bringing forth such a sense of unexpurgated longing.Exceptional 8)
23 October, 2008 at 11:19 am #384198SMELL OF A BURNING STAR
They will taste it, they will sniff it out and track it for a million miles,
hanging from the decks like bunting,
not yet drooped by Egypt’s fire, as she steams into port,
seeping with rice and cotton.
As they troop down, as they skip the plank and plunder from a thousand stalls,
milling on the quay like scarabs,
not yet scorched by heaven’s ash, dropping softly to red
dust on the brass and copper;
they will suck it up
and swallow from a hundred pots,
bellied in the bars like bladders, too soon felled by Isis’ breath,
the gurning of mouths
bloated on desert corpses.Lids tacked hard with grit, beneath a rock, crawling
further in, away, hid.
Green baked brown and leathered tongue too tired
to flick at flies
beating on the ochre crust.Still they court it, still they sniff it out and track it for a million miles,
flapping round the bus like ibis,
not yet sagged by Luxor’s flame, as it rumbles to town,
dripping sweat and luggage.
As they lunge down, as they clear the steps and posture for a thousand snaps,
kicking through the sand like camels,
not yet seared by Hades’ squall, smearing swiftly to black
loam on the polished lenses;
they will gormandize,
engorging from a hundred pots,
swaying in the souks like serpents, too late touched by Ra’s design,
the falcon’s cruel bill
sticky with sun-tan lotion.©
24 October, 2008 at 1:03 pm #384199“Jingle jangle jolly” is reverberating in my brain. I love your use of alliteration and the rhythm of your poetry, Esme. It is unforced and evocative. I hope you are endeavoring to get these published, or have they been already?
I have been in seance all morning with Pound and Keats, and both are in agreement that these distilled wonders must find a wider audience.
Stephen
24 October, 2008 at 3:38 pm #384200Yep Stephen.. supreme stuff from the Esmeric one!
A sensory feast 8)29 October, 2008 at 3:37 pm #384201Hum.
The poppies are swaying
and whispering bees
scoop pollen, pulped pabulous on thrashing winds
bearing peregrines and rain.After the time
when I am only breeze,
stoop low by potentilla
to a recollection of kisses nearly taken,
borne on an insect paean.©
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