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    NO SWANS ON LOCH SUNNART

    (On the south side of the Ardnamurchan peninsula lies Loch Sunnart, with the island of Mull to the south west. Swans are never to be seen on this Loch, for as legend has it, in ancient times a young Celtic chieftain fell for a girl who was way below his social standing. His mother who was against the relationship cast a spell turning the girl into a swan, which the young chieftain killed whilst out hunting, only to see her return in death to her human form. The young chieftain then took his own life so they could rest together by Loch Sunnart. And no swans have been seen there since.)

    He loved her beyond reason and without that sentiment
    for she scrubbed his mother’s floors,
    which by and by grew stickier
    with venom
    and maternal ire
    that being of a faery kind
    and warped to boot,
    turned love into a dour and downy swan

    Shorn winter woods that mutter to the sky
    you saw it happen,
    stood whispering askance
    whilst feathers bled
    and stained the Sunnart
    black.
    Still turn away those branches from the sight
    and have him taste the dirk that slew;
    bite down on steel
    reclaim her soul
    and drowse in ferns forever

    Skim cygnus, skim on arctic bitten spans,
    bold buffeted
    and sheering on north winds;
    Glen Borrodale
    Camas Nan Gaell
    whose sands,
    call down the migrants from the clouds
    to rock the waters
    with their dolorous cries.

    ©

    #384193

    Bonfire

    Up and up
    into a vein-coloured sky,
    go wraiths and spectres
    mabbled soft in shrouds of carbon,
    mournful as the maws of wolves in supplication to their moon
    which –
    frowning with an eyebrow sea,
    slings cold fish tears,
    to dampen down
    the badious bones and bavins
    of a dying month.

    ©

    #384194

    SHETTLESTON ROAD

    The wee beige-bummed mongrel
    patters past the Pizza-Palace,
    pauses to pee
    on a polystyrene carton,
    pauses to sniff
    at his balls,
    then barrels-off across the road
    doggedly,
    taking the corner with a frivolous flounce
    of a furbelow tail.
    Dissonant in the distance,
    the jingle jangle jolly
    of an ice-cream van
    clamouring through concrete,
    clattering past the cordon
    of a row of flats,
    cutting
    like a cutlass,
    like a klaxon,
    like the curdling colic grizzle
    of a crying child.

    Someone’s growing rhubarb in a garden,
    a hooded boy takes pot-shots with a sling.
    The textile shop has a half-price sale,
    a carpenter splits his thumb on a nail
    and the girl in the sauna
    removes her wedding ring.

    The wee beige-bummed mongrel
    pooters past the Peking Palace,
    pauses to poke
    at a pile of paper wrappings,
    pauses to lick
    at his ar se,
    then skittles-off across the street
    snappily,
    skirting a skoda with a fabulous flick
    of a palatine paw.
    Dubious in the distance
    the piercing palilalia
    of an ambulance
    sheering through the city,
    sanguiferous, saccadic
    on a hill of bones,
    scything
    as a sickle,
    as a scalpel,
    as the howling scarlatina
    of a dying child.

    ©

    #384195

    Excellent poetry. [-o<

    #384196

    Thank you Terry..for a poetry hater you’re very kind. :wink:

    #384197

    I agree.. truly a class apart Esme.

    Thank you for the new piece that tops your thread. New in the context of posting it here of course.
    A bittersweet, eternal lament.. with a truly astonishing final verse bringing forth such a sense of unexpurgated longing.

    Exceptional 8)

    #384198

    SMELL OF A BURNING STAR

    They will taste it, they will sniff it out and track it for a million miles,
    hanging from the decks like bunting,
    not yet drooped by Egypt’s fire, as she steams into port,
    seeping with rice and cotton.
    As they troop down, as they skip the plank and plunder from a thousand stalls,
    milling on the quay like scarabs,
    not yet scorched by heaven’s ash, dropping softly to red
    dust on the brass and copper;
    they will suck it up
    and swallow from a hundred pots,
    bellied in the bars like bladders, too soon felled by Isis’ breath,
    the gurning of mouths
    bloated on desert corpses.

    Lids tacked hard with grit, beneath a rock, crawling
    further in, away, hid.
    Green baked brown and leathered tongue too tired
    to flick at flies
    beating on the ochre crust.

    Still they court it, still they sniff it out and track it for a million miles,
    flapping round the bus like ibis,
    not yet sagged by Luxor’s flame, as it rumbles to town,
    dripping sweat and luggage.
    As they lunge down, as they clear the steps and posture for a thousand snaps,
    kicking through the sand like camels,
    not yet seared by Hades’ squall, smearing swiftly to black
    loam on the polished lenses;
    they will gormandize,
    engorging from a hundred pots,
    swaying in the souks like serpents, too late touched by Ra’s design,
    the falcon’s cruel bill
    sticky with sun-tan lotion.

    ©

    #384199

    “Jingle jangle jolly” is reverberating in my brain. I love your use of alliteration and the rhythm of your poetry, Esme. It is unforced and evocative. I hope you are endeavoring to get these published, or have they been already?

    I have been in seance all morning with Pound and Keats, and both are in agreement that these distilled wonders must find a wider audience.

    Stephen

    #384200

    Yep Stephen.. supreme stuff from the Esmeric one!
    A sensory feast 8)

    #384201

    Hum.

    The poppies are swaying
    and whispering bees
    scoop pollen, pulped pabulous on thrashing winds
    bearing peregrines and rain.

    After the time
    when I am only breeze,
    stoop low by potentilla
    to a recollection of kisses nearly taken,
    borne on an insect paean.

    ©

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