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10 October, 2017 at 8:20 pm #1074787
As the clocks go back soon, shortening the day and getting colder , Summer knows he’s receding and Winter is getting bolder. This is the rhyme of the game the seasons play…it’s all about doing one’s thing on a particular day.
Summer recedes but gracefully and organized, he knows there’s no defeat , cause when Winters upon the land, Summer will be warming some other land’s feet.
Autumn is the bridge that lets Winter in and but the message from Autumn is…”neither give in” I am neither cold or hot but i help both of you to bond……because with out this bridge you’d just both fight or abscond.
The Wisdom of Autumn is clear to see…….it stops domination from being absolutely. If the Summer had absolute power we’d all burn up fast and likewise, if the Winter had absolute power, into ice we’d be cast.
In this rhyme i’ve composed, i’ve purposefully left out Spring, because Spring is yet to come and says, first,,,Autumn, and Winter…….deal with these 2 things.
This is part one, i hope you had fun…….imagining the reasons, while they function…these fantastic seasons. I realize who i am to an extent…….i am not a poet…..but it’s a good vent..Every time i went climbing, i was always rhyming.
In way of a rant…i’ll make this end with a chant…….i never was a poet …i like rhymes…..under stand that and we’ll have good times.
hi to every one. You all have a great Tuesday evening.
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10 October, 2017 at 9:23 pm #1074804Interesting
Summer recedes but gracefully and organized, he knows there’s no defeat , cause when Winters upon the land, Summer will be warming some other land’s feet.
Above is my favourite part.
Enjoyed your poem.
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10 October, 2017 at 10:11 pm #1074810Nice poem, and roll on a extra hour in bed Sunday 29th October
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11 October, 2017 at 9:08 am #1074834well, roll on the extra hour.
11 October, 2017 at 10:17 am #1074838W.T.G King…even better falling on a Sunday.
11 October, 2017 at 10:20 am #1074839Hey thanks Sarah!
I’ll guess why you like that part..is it because………when it’s cold and dark here, it’s barbecue time in Oz?
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