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  • 3 March, 2006 at 7:04 pm #3161

    stevenage_f

    Gently you come to me in the night
    Your eyes move over my body
    Your lips whisper my name

    Heavenly figure with eyes of blue
    How i have yearned for you
    I watch your mouth as you call my name
    Is is a dream or will i awake

    You pick me up into your arms
    And hold me close,i have no fear
    Let us stay this way forever
    Angel of Mine…

    By stevenage_f

    3 March, 2006 at 9:14 pm #200765

    angel

    aww that’s nice Stevenage……we all need an Angel in our lives xx

    3 March, 2006 at 9:17 pm #200766

    angelwolf00

    Stevenage, this is beautiful!!

    Angelwolf

    3 March, 2006 at 9:30 pm #200767

    stevenage_f

    Very kind of you both x

    3 March, 2006 at 9:35 pm #200768

    sunny

    Hey steve never had you down for writing like that

    Was lovely i must say

    3 March, 2006 at 9:37 pm #200769

    stevenage_f

    Thank you Sunny x

    3 March, 2006 at 11:08 pm #200770

    William_A_Edge


    Hi Stevenage
    I like your poem it is quite sweet ,just one note I think maybe one more stanza between the second and last would have really nailed it
    Love William xxx

    3 March, 2006 at 11:18 pm #200771

    stevenage_f

    Thank you for your comments x

    3 March, 2006 at 11:24 pm #200772

    William_A_Edge


    Your welcome Stevie ,I hope you took them in the spirit they were meant-Love William xx

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