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  • 22 February, 2006 at 10:55 pm #3002

    William_A_Edge

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    23 February, 2006 at 8:14 am #199080

    angel

    Very interesting poem William….is it based on real events?

    23 February, 2006 at 8:22 am #199081

    William_A_Edge


    No Angel , most of my poems are alerted by something I have seen or read , I just then adapt to suit -Have a nice day -Love William :)

    23 February, 2006 at 8:24 am #199082

    angel

    Thanks William…..have a lovely day yourself :)

    23 February, 2006 at 11:45 am #199083

    angelwolf00



    William,

    It’s one thing to write a poem on how you are feeling whether that emotion is love, anger, or jealousy. BUT….you have went even further and wrote a story with all those emotions in it! That can be difficult.

    I have many poem where I do just that, and those poems have been some of my best poetry. I am totally loving this poem William. You know I can have a bad morning, and I can come here and read poetry and it just changes my whole mood. Poetry ROCKS!!

    Great poem….keep them coming!!

    Angelwolf

    23 February, 2006 at 2:06 pm #199084

    William_A_Edge


    Once more I thank thee maiden for thy critique of mt humble work ,before thee I kneel ,thus I will not rise till thee permit – I can just hear you now saying soppy sod-Love William :roll:

    23 February, 2006 at 5:36 pm #199085

    Oss

    Thoroughly enjoyed that William mate :D

    23 February, 2006 at 11:05 pm #199086

    William_A_Edge


    Thanx Oss-Regards William :)

    12 March, 2006 at 10:35 pm #199087

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