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29 November, 2017 at 11:10 am #1080701

orson kart

IT is one of my songs but I will put it in poem form oh any resemblance to a reg in here is purely coincidental.

well they start off so small
being monitors in the hall
raising their hands in classrooms and telling teachers the news
but they always gave me the blues,with their highly polished shoes
they never pushed in ,in queues
while telling the teachers the news

well they start off being a tell tale tit
but then they start to graduate bit by bit
never had fleas never had a nit
their satchels always shine and their clothes always fit

well im gonna go out and do some shooting
yeh im goin out and stick the boot in
cos I detest them and I hate them
the way I feel I just wanna waste them
they are put on this earth to tout and tout
anything going on its known about
well they’ve got a tale to tell
they have to tell a tale
and they tell it that well
that we all end up in jail

that’s not all of it im only half way thru I just dint want to waste my time to write it all just for it to be pulled
but if its here later on I will post the rest
and that’s when it really gets to the point
so hopefully laters yeh.

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29 November, 2017 at 11:18 am #1080706

Psycho Babble

Not bad cosy,.😎 but Sarah’s poems and songs are much better 😁

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orson kart

29 November, 2017 at 11:23 am #1080710

Psycho Babble

Btw, what key is it in? 🎼🎹

29 November, 2017 at 11:25 am #1080711

orson kart

c with a bit of d and e minor

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Psycho Babble

29 November, 2017 at 11:36 am #1080714
Sairs73
I enjoyed that Orson as a poem.

Glad its not about anyone who chats here.

And thank you babble darling you are too kind x
- This reply was modified 6 years, 12 months ago by Sairs73.
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Psycho Babble
29 November, 2017 at 11:37 am #1080716

orson kart

part 2

well im gonna kill em all,im the man to do it
I was gonna rob a bank,but I went and blew it
cos when I got there the police already knew it
down to touts,yeh down to touts
well im gonna break myself a nose
you gotta break a nose sometimes

in fact im gonna grab myself a grass
and stick bottles up his _ass
im gonna get me a nark
and bury him in the park
kick them till they fall,put em against the wall,hang em by the balls
cos they are sneaky sneaky sneaks
and creepy creepy creeps
and they are snidey snidey snides
all bad on the insides

then its all ad libbing as im fading the song out

then ends with me saying the best way of keeping a secret is by telling nobody
quick bang of a drum

then im gone coat on,to the pub.

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Sairs73

29 November, 2017 at 11:44 am #1080717

Sairs73

Ouch I’d not want to pee you off.

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Psycho Babble

29 November, 2017 at 11:46 am #1080718

orson kart

lol sairs

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Psycho Babble

29 November, 2017 at 12:01 pm #1080727

Psycho Babble

orson kart wrote:

c with a bit of d and e minor

So does it modulate from C Major to D min & Emin or just change chords?

29 November, 2017 at 5:45 pm #1080836

orson kart

its a bit intricate tbh babs man
best way to explain it to you is,i just grab a load of chords,sort of shake them in my palms then chuck em in the air and whatever lands and I catch
I just play that

the music isn’t that important to me…well it is but
my lyrics are more important to me,because I can get my words across to people,who I want to love,hate,dismiss etc,and they don’t realise they think oh its just him messing about doing songs and poems and all that bollox what he does,you know what hes like

yeh well id prefer to do what I do to get across to people
than just playing instrumental music

the days of twanging a guitar serenading women on balconies are over
there gone..history…get over it.
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