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  • 13 October, 2005 at 2:57 pm #1608

    Giggles

    Your snipes cut through like shards of glass,
    gauging chunks of flesh on unseen hooks,
    tearing me up, pulling me apart
    away from my body and my soul.

    Your arm that once protected me
    within your peaceful sanctuary,
    casts me now over smouldering coals
    with anger and disdain.

    One step ahead as I dance my moves,
    deftlike over burning embers,
    scorching and nagging at my skin,
    ever driving home your point.

    Desperate to rest my aching bones
    but still I swerve and twist, while
    pain shoots through my troubled brain.
    You say you love me

    Do you?

    13 October, 2005 at 3:01 pm #153240

    Kriss

    wow Giggles

    very good ……………….powerful

    13 October, 2005 at 3:24 pm #153241

    stevenage_f

    Good poem too did you write those yourself Giggles?

    13 October, 2005 at 3:25 pm #153242

    Giggles

    thanks you two… yes SF, inane ramblings I like to call them :lol:

    13 October, 2005 at 3:28 pm #153243

    stevenage_f

    @giggles wrote:

    thanks you two… yes SF, inane ramblings I like to call them :lol:

    No they are not you have a talent

    14 October, 2005 at 9:42 am #153244

    angel

    @giggles wrote:

    thanks you two… yes SF, inane ramblings I like to call them :lol:

    You always were very modest giggles…..that was a very moving, powerful poem, well done xxxx

    14 October, 2005 at 12:47 pm #153245

    nessie

    wow powerful words……………brilliant xxx

    15 October, 2005 at 12:54 am #153246

    Own Kah

    Ditch him, he doesn’t deserve you! :wink:

    16 October, 2005 at 10:40 am #153247

    Giggles

    :lol: :wink:

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