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    Title given by Scep

    Hanging on

     

    Stripping off all her clothes she gets soapy in the shower

    Her hair is washed her arms are shaved she investigates her flower

    Its been a quiet day she lives alone without her son or daughter

    Then suddenly it all goes dark the lights switch off  – cold water

     

    So in the dark feels for a towel steps out wondering in confusion

    She was enjoying getting busy with herself – did not appreciate intrusion

    Shes sure she topped the meter up but electric has just gone

    She finds the window moves the curtain to see no street lights are on

     

    She finds the torch to see the phone the hotline is then dialled

    Still soaking wet hair in a towel on her head its piled

    The line has many options press number one or two or three

    She hopes they hurry up and speak shes dying for a pee

     

    Shes still hanging on shes still hanging on

    She cant hear any music now she wonders if theyve gone

    Moving feet from left to right phone tethered to the wall

    She doesn’t want to wet herself she wants to end the call

     

    Then suddenly the lights go on now everything is bright

    She wonders why the powercut so very late at night

    She has a cough her towel falls off shes naked once again

    Off she marches to the place where she can relieve the aching pain

     

    Now where was she……………………..

     

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    #1084088

    haha.

     

    I was expecting a different type of ‘hanging on’, but that was hilarious.

    #1084094

    Yes that’s why I prefer to be given titles otherwise the stuff i write has its usual negative slant to it.

     

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