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5 December, 2017 at 6:23 pm #1081861
for his tip memories on his Bristol thread I to lived near a tip and his remininces stirred up memories of my first true love
in fact it was the first ever poem I wrote
its called
love at the tip
it was amongst the broken bottles and cans
that’s where I met my first true love
she was rooting around in a bin
looking as picturesque as the sky above
I said”hey what you looking for”?
she said “well im going out tonight and im looking for some decent clothes I don’t wanna go out in any auld shite”
I told her id found a size 10 dress,and shee looked at me in glee
but I said hey you can only have it on one condition and that’s tonight you come out with me
she looked at me dubiously and said “well I dunno I have got my pride let me go home try on the dress maybe that will help me decide”
seeing as id already fallen in love with her I trusted her
I said “ok I meet you tonight outside the flats”
when she agreed I was so happy I went down the river to shoot me some rats
part 2
when I met her that night she was looking ever so elegant wearing her dress
that id found it that nobody would ever guess
well we were going out steady now and we used to root in the skips together
but one day we had an argument over some iron she told me never to see her again ever
I was broken hearted as I carried my scrap home that night that girl to me was everything
I had to get her back or life simply wouldn’t be worth living
well summer was drifting slowly into autumn
and I spotted her looking for mushrooms in the park
I pleaded with her to come back to me she said …well….I .dunno…er yeh ok mark
well weve been married now 3 years
and on our anniversaries we visit different tips
and we take our little son along to let him play in the skips
and as me and my wife hold hands in the beatwaste together
what I really hope my son will find
is a beautiful tip girl like I found mine.
dedicated to patricia 1965-1999
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5 December, 2017 at 7:37 pm #1081863Wow <3
Imponerende og meget nydelig <3
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